October 18, 2011

A Poem made by Arielle

Last Sunday night my eldest daughter was making a poem for her assignment in English. She was having difficulty in finding words that rhyme. So for every word she thinks of she asks me what word rhyme with what. She allowed me to read the "rough draft" and I am so proud of what she had made.


The above poem was the rough draft and I would like to share it with all of you. Then yesterday she showed me what score her teacher gave her. It's a perfect 10. The teacher even encouraged her to submit the poem she made to the school newspaper. I am so proud of my Ate Arielle. Below is the picture with the score her teacher gave her...


4 comments:

  1. Wow naman! Beatiful poem, Grechie! You really should be proud of your daughter :)

    By the way, thanks for the follow ha. I followed back ;)

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  2. @sherrybasherry: thanks for reading the blog...of course I am so proud of her. sorry ha kasi rough draft niya yan kaya ganyan. hehehe! thanks for following me back...i really appreciate it so much... :D

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  3. the poem is so nice,mukhang may talent ang daughter mo sa creative writing :)

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  4. @Sapphire Mommy (Mommy Jo): hello! thanks for liking the poem my daughter made. thanks for dropping by here at my blog and reading this piece. I appreciate it so much kasi you took some time in reading this... :D

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